Section outline

  • FOCUS / ARONGA

    FOCUS / ARONGA learning intentions:

    We are learning to edit and proofread our writing by identifying areas for improvement. We are enhancing our writing through careful consideration and development of our language choices and our use of sentence structures for effect. We use feedback from teachers and peers to help us in this process.

    Paearu Angitu/ Success Criteria: This week, I can/have…

    • identified ways in which to enhance my writing

    • used feedback to support my edits




    MHJC GREAT Learner Learning to Learn / Ako: Feedback: I give and receive feedback to enhance my writing and that of others

    Victoria and Gurpreet in front of whiteboard