16 October - 22 October

FOCUS / ARONGA learning intentions:

• We are FOCUSING writing complete paragraphs
• We are FOCUSING writing paragraphs using thev PEEL method
• We are FOCUSING proofreading and editing our essay

Fakaalofa Lahi Atu 7C1! 

It is Niuean language!

Are you struggling to start your paragraphs? Do you often get stuck with what to write in your paragraphs? Well, it's easy, just PEEL it! 

This week, we will learn how to write complete paragraph suing the PEEL method.

Learning Intentions:

• I will be able to explain the PEEL paragraph structure.
• I  will be able to write a PEEL paragraph in response to a writing prompt.

Success Criteria:

• I can identify the four components of a PEEL paragraph: Point, Evidence, Explanation, and Link.
• I can write a clear and concise topic sentence that states their main point.
• I can provide relevant evidence to support their topic sentence.
• I can explain how their evidence supports their topic sentence.
• I can use a link sentence to connect their paragraph to the rest of their writing.

Learning activities:

•  How to write a PEEL paragraph 

Prompt: Why is it important to be kind to others?

Point: Being kind to others is important because it makes the world a better place. 

Evidence: When we are kind to others, it makes them feel good and it can brighten their day. It can also make us feel good and it can strengthen our relationships. 

Explanation: When we are kind to others, we are showing them that we care about them and that we value their feelings. This can help to create a more positive and supportive environment for everyone. 

Link: In conclusion, being kind to others is important because it makes the world a better place for everyone.

In class we will be using the prompts given to write our own paragraphs using the PEEL structure.