Section outline

  • He oranga ngākau, he pikinga waiora 

    Positive feelings within you enhances wellbeing

    Kia ora. This week, I want you to proofread and edit your essays.  It would be good if you share your writing with a buddy for peer feedback - when you are writing, you know what you are writing about and sometimes it is hard to see where you need to explain or add detail to make the topic clear.  Getting feedback from a buddy is a great way to see where you need to strengthen your writing.

    Success Criteria: I can/have...

        • Identify appropriate sources of information
        • Use a framework to unpack information
        • Record information with brevity and clarity
        • Use my own notes in my writing

        Activities:

        1. Edit/Proofread essay
        2. Share essay with a buddy
        3. Edit essay based on feedback
        4. Submit essay on google classroom (copy and paste from your document into the one I provide)

        Homework:
        Read a book


        FOCUS / ARONGA

        FOCUS / ARONGA learning intentions:

        • We are FOCUSING on identifying issues in society that are of concern to us.
        • We are FOCUSING on researching our identified issue to construct our personal response to this issue.
        • We are DEVELOPING an oral presentation to discuss and explain our response to an audience.