Section outline

  • We are working on our assessment this week. 

    You might find the following information/links useful.

    https://literarydevices.net/auditory-imagery/




    Tips 

    1. Choose an entrepreneur, not just a famous person.   Focusing on this person’s enterprising qualities, rather than other qualities, which have made a business or a social enterprise (a charity, etc)  successful. 

    2. Don’t forget to define/describe the quality in your own words first, before your start to prove that the entrepreneur has demonstrated that quality.  

    3. Use real examples from reliable sources (e.g. government websites, a published book, etc) to support your point of view.  Your hypothesis, opinion or elaboration are not considered as examples. To get “beyond” grade, you need to discuss a range of enterprising qualities (normally 3 +) and use several good examples (around 3)  for each quality. 

     

    1. Quality over quantity.  Just having included more than three qualities in your writing doesn’t warrant you a “ beyond” grade. You need to discuss “in depth” the qualities with relevant and strong examples.  Don’t repeat the same example in discussing different qualities - it makes your argument weak. 

    2. Plagiarism. Be careful not to copy and paste from the internet. You need to rephrase in your own words.